Shattered Kingdoms

Some of what you said rings true. I did tend to think things out too much. It's my nature as a writer; I'm not an improv artist. But I tried. To my credit, as a hellion she was on a high horse, so to speak, and so conveyed arrogance and uncaring in a dismissive manner. She called meetings, tried to act the official figure, the administrator, tried to seem in-charge, as her role demanded. But oftentimes when I tried to improve her reputation, I screwed up, or it backfired in some way, and it only made things worse.

There were characters that influenced her greatly, but the character tried to be unyielding, uncompromising, a hard-liner with religious conviction in herself, her duty, and her goals.

But I appreciate the constructive criticism and I'll keep it in mind as I try to do better.

<3

Without being repetitive on what others have said, you should take pride in the fact that your character caused such reactions from other players of this game. It takes a lot of extreme role play to do that. You put forth a lot of effort, and it shows, one way or the other.

Menkh admired Kura and Faerti disliked her, but respected her. When Ralina cut out her eye, I laughed. That description was just asking for it!

All in all, an astounding character - and even though you sucked in PK, at least you tried, unlike, say, me.

Best of luck!