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Author: | mageZorekin [ Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:45 pm ] |
Post subject: | Magical lamp |
Code: Slips from 's grip and falls to the ground with a clatter. Suddenly, a plume of smoke spits out of the lamp and obscures all vision for a moment.
Gallus drops a battered, beat-up brass lamp. I see quite a few errors in this, namely the first sentence doesn't even have the name of who went into the lamp, and then there is the 's part. Wert can look into this one! |
Author: | werttrew [ Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:01 am ] |
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Typo log it. |
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