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| Author: | ninja_ardith [ Wed Feb 18, 2015 3:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | A poem about my heroes and how to play SK |
I put on my hockey mask and coveralls I open the door and go outside I look down the street I see a kid in a parka I hate him I throw my hatchet and it sticks in his forehead I grin behind the mask I am in my element |
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| Author: | motheroon [ Fri May 15, 2015 1:39 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A poem about my heroes and how to play SK |
The differing lengths of lines does create some tension. The words 'hatchet' and 'element' create some cadence with the similar vowels used. Why is the kid wearing a parka? Otherwise I feel I understand this poem. |
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| Author: | Chem [ Fri May 15, 2015 5:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A poem about my heroes and how to play SK |
motheroon wrote: The differing lengths of lines does create some tension. The words 'hatchet' and 'element' create some cadence with the similar vowels used. Why is the kid wearing a parka? Otherwise I feel I understand this poem. Because no one likes a kid wearing a parka. |
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| Author: | Yed [ Fri May 15, 2015 6:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A poem about my heroes and how to play SK |
LoL |
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