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Where Roleplay and Tactics Collide! Roleplay required, roleplay rewarded. Unique quests, enormous map and one-of-a-kind areas. No global channels. Freely open for ten years. Website help and forums available.
We idle chatted in the Talon all the time.
And in my teamspeak.
As for the OP issue, the only thing I would suggest is examining the paradoxical situation you set up with "roleplay required, roleplay rewarded."
It doesn't quite make sense. We're required to be rewarded? What makes the reward special if I get it just for doing what's required? And so forth.
The major points of the blurb don't highlight the coolest and most developed aspects of the game, sort of.
I dunno, something maybe like:
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Adventure in a world of brutal tactics and neverending roleplay! Experience a MUD with a one-of-a-kind total immersion experience, from no global channels to a unique overworld map and beyond. Explore a continually updated world spanning dozens of custom-built and community-developed areas. Destroy your foes! Enjoy your friends! Create your own legends in Shattered Kingdoms today!