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teh1337n00b · **Posted:** Fri Oct 20, 2006 6:00 am

Fepel Veiled wrote:

No one took the bait so I tossed out the 4th stage of Ghent's aging process which with the colour and everything looks decent as a description.

Don't worry, in a week or two will be the ultimate change to his discription.

Actually Fepel I think very very few of us to care enough to change our descriptions once age ticks kick in... So for most people, if they have looked at you once and read your desc, it's over that is...

I have seen humans at the age of 50+/60+ with descs like "This man appears at the peak of his youth surging with energy... His eager to learn eyes... His skin is perfectly healthy in the color of youth...."

When i mentioned, "HEY ... you RP an AGED human, change your desc, the answer was... Bleh, nevermind who reads that stuff anyway..."

So I rest my case...

Fepel Veiled · **Joined:** Mon Nov 29, 2004 10:53 am **Posts:** 1786

Ya know.. I got halfway through your post and was like... blah.. who reads the eternal n00b shite anyway!?!

One Valiant Truth · **Joined:** Sun Jul 18, 2004 3:09 am **Posts:** 2174

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This griffon has a very sleek look to him.  His feathers are as black as
coal and shimmer slightly.  His beak is as ebon as the rest of his features.
His eyes stare out wisely, even they are the color of pitch.  His very sharp
talons, which are black as midnight sky, flash sharply in light.  

All $0$I

Magic me up a better one with your tele-kawhatsits powers!

Im2old4u · **Posted:** Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:17 am

Just change the last part to:

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His very sharp teeth, which are black as midnight sky, flash sharply in moonlight.

...and you got one of the scariest desc, ever!

One Valiant Truth · **Joined:** Sun Jul 18, 2004 3:09 am **Posts:** 2174

But but but...that would ruin the haiku...

ilkaisha · **Posted:** Sat Oct 21, 2006 4:32 am

One Valiant Truth wrote:

But but but...that would ruin the haiku...

haiku is 5/7/5 not 6/7/5 you dolt. it would -make- it a haiku.

Salandarin · **Posted:** Sat Oct 21, 2006 11:46 am

flash sharply in moonlight = 6
...1......2..3....4.....5.....6...

ilkaisha · **Posted:** Sat Oct 21, 2006 2:21 pm

heh. quite right. i thought the only word changed was talons to teeth.

no haiku either way.

revin loses.

One Valiant Truth · **Joined:** Sun Jul 18, 2004 3:09 am **Posts:** 2174

Took out the word 'his'. Thanks for the constructive critism you snipey horse-sucking-off [REDACTED]. Please continue to make contributive posts.

Syndal · **Posted:** Sat Oct 21, 2006 9:59 pm

Code:

The sprite woman before you looks about the same size as any other normal
sprite.  She has dark red butterfly wings with swirling patterns in a
lighter red.  Her skin is nearly the same color as healthy, green grass. 
Straight hair the same dark red color as her wings, surrounds her tiny
heart-shaped face and hangs down loosely to the middle of her back.  Bright
purple eyes peek out from behind her bangs, which partially covers them. 
She has arched, thin eyebrows and long eyelashes, both the same color as her
hair.  Under her small nose are a pair of pinkish-red, pouting lips.  Her
body is slim and flat with lean arms and legs.  The manicured, short nails
on her fingers and toes are painted the same bright purple as her eyes.  

All kinds of gaps in this, but if I delete them, I'll get somebody going OMGZ you did something bad!

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